This is my digital rough. I talked to Professor S and have decided on a lot of things to change. I'm going to completely redo the whole thing, but this is the starting point. First of all, I want to make the king look more stately (like the sketches that never showed up here) by making is form longer and thinner. I'm also going to make the hand waves more apparent, make the whole thing look more formal (starting with the text) and clean up all the lines, making it smoother.
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I read a little bit about your play in Wikipedia so I could understand this a little better. So you are going to have the King (the brother that is in throne?) coming out of the water? Or is the duke conjuring up a storm? I think this could turn out pretty great once you make your changes to it. It would be kinda cool to see the ship a little bigger so you can tell that he's controlling the weather.
hey max!
i really like this concept. its a strong image so the message conveyed would be pretty successful if your were to work on some things!!!
however, i agree with todd on making the king stick out more.... or be more obvious as a king figure. right now, i dont know anything about the tempest so im a little confused as to what this guy is up to- haha.
nice job though- im excited to see your final piece.
i agree I didnt even know there was a ship or that it was a king until i read the other comments so making that bigger and making him appear with more king features, and most likely after all of your changes you talk about this would look pretty sweet itself
Max,
Since we've already talked about this at length, I don't really have anything to add here.
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