The top image is going to have "Metric" in neon lighting; the triangle things are translucent colored lights; the girl is dead.
The bottom image is the same set up as the top, only it will have a broken disco ball on the floor instead of the dead girl.
4 comments:
The girl dead on the disco floor is a great idea, it would be pretty cool if you could show the disco lights sparkling on her corpse.
Right now I like the dead girl better ,but I think the broken disco ball could be really cool if done right. What if it was seeping a little blood or something?
I like the way you're forming the type and I like the lights on the top one. If you choose the bottom one, I don't think the location of your smaller text (the lines, right?) looks very good
i like the first sketch better.... buttttt i think the disco ball could look really awesome if you could make it sparkly and colorful. then again that might not be what your song is about- which is why i liked your first design... even though im not familiar with your song, i get a pretty solid idea of it. the band name written in neon lights sounds very cool as well.
Both of these designs are awesome. The shattered disco ball is interesting, I like how the shattered peices draw your eye up to the text. However, in comparison to the dead girl I don't think the disco ball is nearly as eye catching. You could even put a bra on her without losing the impact of the image, if the nudity is what's holding you back from choosing that one. I also think the top image would e enhanced if the girl took up more space in the design. It looks like you used the grid to place each graphic, which can be effective but the space between the girl and the text is somewhat empty and the girl just doesn't seem large enough to balance the text at the top.
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