So the spacing on these two images here is a little off, but the green lines that extend from the lower letters are supposed to "cross over" to the other side of the card, mostly to continue communicating "across" and also to give the back side some style.
I am still working on the signature, but I plan to use this font style as a base, then add my own designs over it to make the font a little more interesting.
I chose the sans-serif font on the bottom paired with the more wavy font used on "THE" for the logo font because I think that together they allude to both sci-fi and fantasy, and I wanted to a bold sans-serif to stand out from the logo. I may still find a more suitable font though, I think I want something a little more rounded at the seams.
The card is for Ms. Sasha Vonstabbington, CEO, and includes a cell, work, fax & email. On the bottom left is the store information, address, phone & website.
2 comments:
Veronica,
So, the logomark is looking MUCH better. The letterforms are interesting and appropriate, and could look even better w/some hand-decoration. Just don't overdo it. I'm a little concerned about the logotype. I like the idea behind it, but I'm afraid they don't pair well.
Regarding the card, my first thought is: don't ever use yellow for type on a white background. It is all but entirely unreadable. Use another color for the type or background to give yourself more visual contrast. Also, watch your type—it's looking mighty small. 6pt type is pushing it. Anything smaller is asking for it. I'd stick to 7+ pt on a business card. Also, try to create some visual variation among the information. And wouldn't Vonstabbington be two words??
Hey Veronica! I think the logo is working out well, but the type at the bottom needs a little adjusting. Maybe bring it a little closer together? I think you will have this down and good by Tuesday for sure!
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